Chloe Chiappetti
Dearest Animal Farm,
I hope by me taking the time to
write this letter gives you the closure you all have been looking for deserve
and have a better understanding of why
the revolution took place. Of course, we can identify and debate on events and
actions that made the farm crumble and what had caused it to erupt. However, we
can also identify characters responsible for the chaos on the Animal Farm. My purpose
is to demonstrate the fault in the system itself. But I’m writing this letter
not to blame any individual character for the failure of the revolution
but just to make you aware of what you could have done to have prevented it
.All animals were to blame, some
just more than others. For example, Boxer
continuously remained sincere hard worker but was simple minded and was
not completely educated. Mollie continued to be interested only in personal
comforts and had other interests than taking part and rebelling against the
pigs. Benjamin preferred not to express any of his views or opinions, which was unfortunate
because with all the wisdom he obtained he never acted on it. If all the
animals would have worked together and would have always had a voice and would
have demanded changes I feel that the
revolution could have been saved. For instance, when Napoleon loses sight of
what his obligations are to the animals on the farm then he becomes a dictator.
But the animals are also partially responsible for their fate because they
ignore the signs that indicate how dangerous Napoleon is. For example, the
animals blindly believe Napoleon when he explains that Snowball is a traitor.
The other animals blindly follow Napoleon's lead without question.
"ALL ANIMALS ARE EQUAL, BUT
SOME ARE MORE EQUAL THAN OTHERS"- Orwell,.82 This quote stuck out to me more
then the rest because the pigs were trying to convey that all animals are not
really created equal because the pigs were better ("more equal") than
the rest of the animals. " Originally they agreed with Old Majors claim that all animals were equal but
when he passed the pigs gained the control and felt they were superior to
everyone else. What has happened here is that the pigs have elevated themselves
to the position of their former masters, they now see themselves as superior,
not equal, to the other animals. The idea of "more equal" is just
silly propaganda meant to keep the "lower nature" animals dominated
so they don't get the idea into their heads to overthrow their new leaders the
same way that their new leaders overthrew their former masters, the humans. Napolean and the other pigs changed the rules to suit them as they began
to look down on the other animals and consider themselves to be equal
to humans - and they even started acting like humans. And at the end of
the book, as the other animals looked around the table at the pigs'
faces and the human faces, they couldn't tell the difference between
them.
I hope this gives everyone a
better understanding and in the future will be more cautious in whom they choose
to rule and take control of the farm. If everyone was more communicative with
all each other and willing to put in the effort to work together this could
have all been avoided. I hope this letter finds you all well and in good
spirits and how each and everyone of you
have the power to rebuild your society. Best Wishes!
Yours truly,
Chloe Chiappetti
Good tone in opening; strong insights in paragraph 2; need more quotes and smoother integration of quotes :) B
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